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Since a young age,
I swore never to wear fur.
Not because I’m some ignorant cur,
I know how high in mighty status,
These beautiful coats make us.
Seeing a wolf skin up for wear,
Was a little more than I could bear.

The stuffed feet you see here,
Have left footprints far and near,
Felt the spring, summer and snow,
Stepped in the cool river water flow.
Walked through mud, snow and grass,
Leaned into the wind’s terrible blast.

Those glassy eyes that were dug up from the mire,
Had once flashed with cold hell-fire,
Narrowed in utmost fury,
Till its foes felt it was time to worry.
Seen sights we’ll never see,
We know that, you and me.

That tail now listless and still,
At a time wagged like a crazed windmill,
Shagged up in agitation,
Before it’s host met termination.

As the harvest ripens the crop and wine tips from cups,
What if this wolf had some pups?
They will await their non-existent parent,
Never to return, not now…
Or ever…

So my reader, if I wanted to look grand,
Go out and impress my friends,
I would wear a fancy tux,
Maybe just a little faux.
Stroll through the glade’s grass and burs,
But NEVER, or EVER will I wear furs!!!

Wandering-wolves
-Winston-
©2008-2009 *Wandering-wolves
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This is my first original poetry!yay!

enjoy!:D

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:iconpigeonn:
beautiful. and so very true. <3
:iconwandering-wolves:
Thanks,I got the idea from a story "katzenfell".It's a great story about this cat fur with 9 lives,when he was alive he was the king of cats and feared nothing.I started from there and carried on.:)

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-Life is like a walnut cake,throughly mixed up,nutty and tastes like a bad joke.

Just your average crazy,computer illiterate furry artist.
:iconfanghunter:
very well done seriously i love it

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the destruction of the world is my goal but my path to power has been blocked off by my vessel the very one that showed true promise is the one who could stop me but not for long
:iconwandering-wolves:
TNX!I don't do poetry often.Only once to place on my Diary,it's too long to type here,but it kindda says there is nothing interesting inside and keep out.I keep it to sort my whacky thoughts out,there isn't anything wrong about a guy having a journal,right?

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-Life is like a walnut cake,throughly mixed up,nutty and tastes like a bad joke.

Just your average crazy,computer illiterate furry artist.
:iconfanghunter:
umm... no there is nothing wrong with a journal but didnt you just call it a diary

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the destruction of the world is my goal but my path to power has been blocked off by my vessel the very one that showed true promise is the one who could stop me but not for long
:iconwandering-wolves:
Diary,journal...what's the dif?

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-Life is like a walnut cake,throughly mixed up,nutty and tastes like a bad joke.

Just your average crazy,computer illiterate furry artist.
:iconfanghunter:
diary is often associated with the female form of a memorie recording booklet and a journal is the male form

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the destruction of the world is my goal but my path to power has been blocked off by my vessel the very one that showed true promise is the one who could stop me but not for long
:iconwandering-wolves:
Same purporse,same form,different name.Is that wrong?

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-Life is like a walnut cake,throughly mixed up,nutty and tastes like a bad joke.

Just your average crazy,computer illiterate furry artist.
:iconfanghunter:
diary tends to be more colorfull and pretty and journal not so colorfull and pretty did you know that i like to argue for no reason journals are called diary by a lot of people actualy lol like i said no reason

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the destruction of the world is my goal but my path to power has been blocked off by my vessel the very one that showed true promise is the one who could stop me but not for long
:iconwandering-wolves:
Really,I don't see much difference,spaghetti,noodles,bee hoon,mee,pasta,tang hoon...there is no difference beside names.Likewise with diaries and journals.Think whatever you want,but people record their feelings in them all the same.

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-Life is like a walnut cake,throughly mixed up,nutty and tastes like a bad joke.

Just your average crazy,computer illiterate furry artist.

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